tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4719231270858062448.post6394048585906716397..comments2024-01-16T12:05:44.774+00:00Comments on My Book Journey: WHERE NEXT #1: YOU DECIDEHannah Mariskahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619039217059753515noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4719231270858062448.post-48397988626257092542011-05-27T20:37:26.337+01:002011-05-27T20:37:26.337+01:00:) i'm excited and i have no idea where this i...:) i'm excited and i have no idea where this is going!!Hannah Mariskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619039217059753515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4719231270858062448.post-50580335738557285932011-05-24T10:22:59.916+01:002011-05-24T10:22:59.916+01:00Ooh this is fun. I like the idea of Eve revealing ...Ooh this is fun. I like the idea of Eve revealing a secret from the past. <br /><br />I really liked it - I found myself drawn into the story straightaway. I would perhaps consider cutting back on the word 'half' in the first paragraph, other than that I really did enjoy it.serendipity_vivhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07156013023056026525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4719231270858062448.post-75148533112278346442011-05-24T06:54:34.257+01:002011-05-24T06:54:34.257+01:00Great start, and I like the idea of having us vote...Great start, and I like the idea of having us vote for it. <br /><br />I think they should both be supernaturals, and there should be a secret that comes back to bite them in the ass (someone they thought they had killed years ago suddenly appears in town or something)<br /><br />Can't wait for the next one :DJamie Gibbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168603412367448706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4719231270858062448.post-40694267019991161472011-05-23T18:33:27.072+01:002011-05-23T18:33:27.072+01:00I think Lucas should make an offer she cant refuse...I think Lucas should make an offer she cant refuse.Dani Riothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18197433558158209551noreply@blogger.com